Jennifer Derksen

[jennifer]

Derksen,Jennifer,Jones

"Deception....Disgrace...Evil as Plain as the Scar on her Face"

Full Name: Jennifer Jones Derksen.
Age: 18
D.O.B.: November 12
Race: Italian-Irish
Sexual Orientation: In Closest Lesbian(yet to come out outside of home)
Tachi, Neko, or Riba:Riba (either)
Year:5th

Ht: 5"5
Wt: 120
Hair: Jennifer’s Hair reaches to her neck and the rest is in a pony tail. She was born with a light blondish hair.

Eyes: Her eyes are Shaped like an Oval and she also has about 1 inch eye lashes. her eye color is a turquoise color.
Skin: Tan
Marks: Her first scar she has is located on her forehead when her mother upon finding out she was not straight wiped her across the forehead. He second and only other one is locate on her Arm when she was thrown down and "Manhandled" So to speak and being trash talked by her mother

Best Physical Trait: Her Hair she seems to spend alot of time on it
Clothing Style: a black top and Small Dress for her Bottom along with High Heels or non-high heels if they get un-comfortable

Bag Style: A Blue Shoulder Bag.

Overall Physical Description:

Jennifer is what Men called "A women with a great Body" but she never paid attention to the Men's comments as she was never interested in them. She is probably as far as she knows one of the few girls wearing a hat always to cover up the scar she got from her mother when shunned from her Family. She also is seen with a Bandana covering up the scar on her Arm lastly she is always seen with a gold necklace she got from her cousin before her banishment so to speak from her family.

Her hair is about average length that reaches down to about her neck. she is often seen with a slight blush make-up on her cheeks. She also is seen with a white Jacket covering herself as lately she hasn’t been wanting to be seen with others since she was shunned by her parents. She also seems to wear black skirt seem to symbol the pain she has been though in the past.

Likes:

• Cats
  
• Music
  
• Friendly People
  
• Girls
  
• Food(shes got a big appitite for a girl yet doesn’t gain much wait as she works it off XD)

Dislikes:

• dogs
  
• Cigerate smoke
  
• Jerks

Turn-ons:

Someone who is out going
Loves music like herself
doesn’t mind getting in trouble

Turn-offs:

Someone who Abuses others
People who are WAY to serious
Dog person

Hobby: Writing stories.
Overall Personality:

Although Jennifer is a pretty play full person when it comes to most things, She is a bit on the Shy side when it comes to talking with girls as outside of home she has yet to what people call "Come out" even though Her cousin Michael Derksen has been trying to convince her to for some time now. She tends to not mind getting in trouble considering she got it in it a lot back at home but she tries not to get caught though she never seemed to be good at that though she was improving at that.

Jennifer is generally friendly with everyone She meets. Jennifer is always looking to make good friends. Although Jennifer is Generally shy and Calm She Does tend to get short tempered around complete morons or idiots to be nice. a few other things to be known about Jennifer is that if someone is pissing Jennifer off She tends to be Sarcastic with them not to be mean or anything it’s just her way of saying "Your Annoying me"

She has been shy in the past mainly cause she has never been able to talk to a girl with out blushing like crasy or them making her blush so she finds it hard to talk to them. As for short tempered that has to do with her Cosion Constantly pushing her buttons about trying to flirt with the girls and such and that would get anyone anoyed or short tempered easily.
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Parents: Sandy Derksen-41-Lawler
Jim Derksen-41-Pro Baseball
Siblings:

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Pets:

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One Notable Past Event:

When Jennifer was 18 her life pretty much took a turn for the worse as far as Support came. One night her mother was coming in to tell her dinner was ready only to find her daughter being "seduced" By her close friend. That made her so mad that not only kicked her friend out but told jen to pack her things and get out of her life. Because of this ever since Jen has been having to support herself it has been a hard life ever since for jen..

Overall History: Jennifer was Originally Born into a pretty wealthy family so she had a pretty easy life but always hid that but did get money from her parents when they needed it. Because of Jennifer's Kind Nature she was like a lot at School some even "eyeing her" Both genders actually as she was also considered a what they called. "Beautiful young lady" But outside of the ladies eyeing her she really didn’t pay attention with the ladies she went about as red as a tomato. Jennifer never understood why she went red but she did with the ladies than one day her life took a turn.

At Age 13 her parents started Pressing her into focusing more on school than the boys at School as un know to them she was not into the boys at School so she agreed to avoid any suspension from them. After her 14th Birthday Her and Her Close friend started Secretly dating so that her parents didn’t find out as Jennifer's parents where very Judgmentally when it came to same sex Dating. They Were Christian after all and according to her parents it was a sin witch in her mind was bull shit. So in order to keep her parents happy she kept her dating a secret.

At Age Sixteen she had earned enough good grades to get into any school she wanted making her parents very happy and pretty much bragged about her to their friends at work Jennifer was glad her parents where happy. At Age Seventeen she finally came out of the secrecy with her dad luckily unlike her mom he wasn’t as judgmentally as her and was happy for her but it was her mother who would be the problem and that would show come her Eighteenth birthday.

When Jennifer was 18 her life pretty much took a turn for the worse as far as Support came. One night her mother was coming in to tell her dinner was ready only to find her daughter being "seduced" By her close friend. That made her so mad that not only kicked her friend out but told jen to pack her things and get out of her life. Because of this ever since Jen Has Had to support herself it has been a hard life ever since for jen witch was not a good thing.

But one Day she caught her break while working 2 jobs to keep a place to live she got a letter in the Mail inviting her to Charm Academy witch happened to be an all-girl school. She wondered if people would accept her there. Deciding to give it a shot she packed up her things and headed for the nearest cab and headed for Charm academy wondering what awaited her there.
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Username: Jennifer.
Age: 18
Email: [e-mail]
Timezone: Pacific i think
Rating of Site: Ten epic Job admins
How did you find this site: Site Surfing
RP Sample:

[/color]" She muttered with a smile as she closed her eyes taking the view and breeze in with a smile this was good to say the least or it could be she hadn’t been to the beach in a while but whatever the case was she was glad she came today..[/i][/ul]

[MOMO]

She can't be eighteen if she's a first year. First years are 13-14 year olds. You can't only say the color of her hair but describe it as well, the same as her eyes. You say she has a scar. Where is it, how did she get it, what does it look like? Overall Physical description needs to describe her more. Hair, eyes, anything else physical. Describe her personality more. Give more detail. You must name her parents. In her history you skip straight to her being eighteen. Please describe what happened before then.

Also you have alot of typos in there. Miss-spelled words and such, like Cosion is supposed to be cousin.

Her icons must show her face.

[jennifer]

ok hows this any better?

[MOMO]

For her age and grade. If she's eighteen she'd be a fifth year. For her hair and eyes. Don't just say "average" like on the eyes you say average size and for hair you say average length. Although I allow mild cussing in rp posts I don't in the applications. I think you used curse words about three times. Please change them. For personality you says she's shy but she's also friendly but also quick-tempered. I still need more detail on this. As for her parents. You still don't post them. Your physical descirption seems rushed but i'll accept it once you fix the other stuff.

[jennifer]

ok i think i got it now ^^; but your the judge

[MOMO]

Again with her hair you can't say "just about right for a female". And her eyes can't be two colors. Say either blue or green or turquoise.

[jennifer]

there we go silly me >.<

[MOMO]

I'll accept it.